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what do you think of this rap\?

Jarreau Fourie Asked: what do you think of this rap?

The feeling is disappearing,we no longer connect
Both emotions, depression and affection start to reflect
Yes..I'm breaking her heart,im doing what's wrong
Exploiting my mistakes within this song
The season is changing the rain is beginning
Im Stricken By the feeling of pain
Starting to show signs of being insane
Althoughthe feeling is right,the emotion is tight
Still the love might just end over night
Blood spilling from this wrist,I'm becoming ludicrous
This is my blood sweat and tears,this a feeling I haven't felt in years
it appears that love changes quick like how Ferraris Switch gears
Damn,the blood is stained,love is lost,and hate is gained
While I'm contained within this entrapment of pain
Another ni99a fallen victim to the heartbreak game
Insomnia kicked in sh!!t I haven't slept for one week
Yess… It makes one weak
It hits my gut as my mind is struck within this hype
Questioning myself why do I always fall for your type

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Posted by Zelma Jefferson - May 23, 2012 at 6:40 pm

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How to get insomnia"……?

Jarreau Fourie Asked: How to get insomnia"……?

You mean how did you get insomnia??

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Posted by Zelma Jefferson - May 21, 2012 at 4:00 pm

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What do u think of this incomplete rap…?

Jarreau Fourie Asked: What do u think of this incomplete rap…?

Hook

Seems like im a VIP at the club of pain
Another ni99a fallen victim to the heartbreak game
Insomnia kicked in sh.itI haven't slept for one week
Yes,It makes one weak….the emotion's looking bleak
So I'm set on the scene of the pain that one has never seen
The intensity rises,as im trapped within the matrix of insanity
Patiently awaiting the moment of sincerity

Verse

Damn words I never said and never will
that's truthful like the words from that alcohol spill
Seems like Heartbreak hotel is where I'm checked in
Seems like the end is just beginnin
Wondering if I'm following ,the pursuit of happiness
Consumed By the darkness and the lifeless
Because the pain is ,infinitely limitless
Yes ,living life with no emotion,no devotion or adoration
Linked to depression by the obscene obsession for affection
Deceived by the intense influential impressions
Controlled by the L.I.V.E and the L.I.V.E.D
Read it backward so that you can see
As I regain a slight amount of consciousness
I find within myself pure loneliness….
Damn who would've thought
A young ni99a writting rhymes would be caught

Is it likely for me to get signed….?????

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Posted by Zelma Jefferson - April 7, 2012 at 8:40 pm

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What do u think of this verse and hook so far?

Jarreau Fourie Asked: What do u think of this verse and hook so far?

Hook:
Seems like im a VIP at the club of pain
Another ni99a fallen victim to the heartbreak game
Insomnia kicked in sh.itI haven't slept for one week
Yes,It makes one weak….the emotion's looking bleak
So I'm set on the scene of the pain that one has never seen
The intensity rises,as im trapped within the matrix of insanity
Patiently awaiting the moment of sincerity
Bound to end up in depression,caused by an obsession
Dying from hate yet I'm reaching for affection

Verse:
Damn words I never said and never will
that's truthful like the words from that alcohol spill
Seems like Heartbreak hotel is where I'm checked in
Seems like the end is just beginnin
Wondering if I'm following ,the pursuit of happiness
Consumed By the darkness and the lifeless
Because the pain is ,infinitely limitless
Yes ,living life with no emotion,no devotion or adoration
Linked to depression by the obscene obsession for affection
Deceived by the intense influential impressions
Controlled by the L.I.V.E and the L.I.V.E.D
Read it backward so that you can see
As I regain a slight amount of consciousness
I find within myself pure loneliness….
Damn who would've thought
A young ni99a writting rhymes would be caught
In this predicament, victim to the love omnipotent

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Posted by Zelma Jefferson - April 4, 2012 at 4:40 pm

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Some honest feedback on this rap please?

Jarreau Fourie Asked: Some honest feedback on this rap please?

Seems like im a VIP at the club of pain
Another ni99a fallen victim to the heartbreak game
Insomnia kicked in sh.itI haven't slept for one week
Yes,It makes one weak….the emotion's looking bleak
So I'm set on the scene of the pain that one has never seen
The intensity rises,as im trapped within the matrix of insanity
Patiently awaiting the moment of sincerity
Bound to end up in depression,caused by an obsession
Dying from hate yet I'm reaching for affection

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Posted by Zelma Jefferson -  at 10:20 am

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